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Hey Josh,
I really enjoyed reading your entry this week. It hit home for me having a big family and being around cousins having the time of our lives. You really nailed the imagery in this entry and didn’t over-complicate your piece with big fancy words. I feel that when expressing yourself you should just say what comes to mind, which you have done perfectly! Keep it up.
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